lilylover
Shiny_Rock
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- Nov 29, 2008
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I am getting married in 6 days and our Chaplain has asked for our wedding vows asap. We our writing our own, and I am not sure if I like mine or not.
Opinions/Constructive criticism needed!
Nick –
I have been anticipating this moment before I even met you, and now that it has finally come it far exceeds anything that I could have ever imagined. I am so blessed to be marrying someone who would do anything for me. You are truly the kindest person I have ever met and I am so happy that you are taking this step with me.
Promises have always meant so much to us, and there is no greater promise that I can make to you than the one that I am making today. I promise to always stand by your side, even if I am not sure where it will take us. I promise to always laugh at your jokes, and let you know that it is okay to cry. I will do my best to bring out the best in you and in return be the best that I can. I promise to always find time in my day to show you that I love you, and to provide encouragement when you need it, but space when you ask for it. I will never forget how to have fun, and most of all… I will never forget the love I feel for you standing up here today.
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I am having trouble ending it. Is that a sufficient ending? I feel like it''s a little abrupt. Should I cut out the first paragraph? Ahhhh! I don''t know what to do!
Thank you so much for any feedback you can give!
Opinions/Constructive criticism needed!
Nick –
I have been anticipating this moment before I even met you, and now that it has finally come it far exceeds anything that I could have ever imagined. I am so blessed to be marrying someone who would do anything for me. You are truly the kindest person I have ever met and I am so happy that you are taking this step with me.
Promises have always meant so much to us, and there is no greater promise that I can make to you than the one that I am making today. I promise to always stand by your side, even if I am not sure where it will take us. I promise to always laugh at your jokes, and let you know that it is okay to cry. I will do my best to bring out the best in you and in return be the best that I can. I promise to always find time in my day to show you that I love you, and to provide encouragement when you need it, but space when you ask for it. I will never forget how to have fun, and most of all… I will never forget the love I feel for you standing up here today.
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I am having trouble ending it. Is that a sufficient ending? I feel like it''s a little abrupt. Should I cut out the first paragraph? Ahhhh! I don''t know what to do!
Thank you so much for any feedback you can give!
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