Calling Barrett (aka my husband to be)

[LD]

Oh gorgeous spouse - just wondering if you had seen this thread?

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Saw you had posted today and think your input would be exceptionally valuable ..............

Just as a complete aside, I understand you're currently on a gemstone/mining hunt? I'm guessing that you're searching for the perfect e-ring for us both to enjoy? Just saying ...............

 

[minousbijoux]

This shameless flirting has just GOT to stop! Get married already! LD, you'll have a little detail you'll need to work out (two husbands maybe?)

 

[LD]

This shameless flirting has just GOT to stop! Get married already! LD, you'll have a little detail you'll need to work out (two husbands maybe?)

Details, details Minou! I don't hear my lovely Barratt complaining! Anyway, isn't that legal somewhere in the world?

 

[Barrett]

Next stop, Utah!!!!!!!!!!! Let me check that link, LD, my dear. I will be across the pond in the next year or two then we can consuma.... ......errr...um.....we can hang out...yea!

 

[LD]

Yeah baby yeah!



Can't you just see Minou doing this ....... LOL!

 

[minousbijoux]

Nope, now I'm rooting for you to get together, and assume it will be like one of those romance novellas, you know, like "he presses her against his savagely beating chest, and she realizes that she cannot resist the lust in her loins..." or some such thing.

You'll have to report back

 

[LD]

Nope, now I'm rooting for you to get together, and assume it will be like one of those romance novellas, you know, like "he presses her against his savagely beating chest, and she realizes that she cannot resist the lust in her loins..." or some such thing.

You'll have to report back

Crikey Minou have you been reading 50 Shades of Grey by any chance?

 

[minousbijoux]

No and won't be if the writing is as bad as what I wrote...is it?!!

 

[chrono]

Dang it, ladies, do I have to hose you down?

 

[ChrisA222]

loins???

 

[movie zombie]

we're not talking chops.....

 

[distracts]

I love this thread.

 

[Enerchi]

Minous! You have quite the talent there --- can't wait for the next chapter in this lusty tale!

 

[cm366]

Do we have GIA grading criteria for flesh tones? I can picture Chrono hosing 'em down while the spectators debate whether the scene is vivid or merely intense...

 

[minousbijoux]

Aww, c'mon now! Anyone who knows Chrono knows that she would drop the hose and come running the minute there was a debate about saturation level...

Enerchi: **blushing** Thanks for the compliment, but I'm sure there are others far better at writing dreck than me

 

[Enerchi]

Aww, c'mon now! Anyone who knows Chrono knows that she would drop the hose and come running the minute there was a debate about saturation level...

Enerchi: **blushing** Thanks for the compliment, but I'm sure there are others far better at writing dreck than me

I dunno... you got the hang of that genre pretty well! "She was helpless in his arms - her heaving bosom barely able to contain the heat and passion she felt for him. Barrett knew his power - he lorded it over her like the wench she was. Power and longing merged together in a whirlwind of sight sound and sensations. They knew they could not hold back - it was inevitable that one day, he would conquer her woman hood and she would be his ---- forever. She knew it too. The blazing flame in his eyes spoke a lifetime of passion lay ahead of them..."

Geesh, I think I need a smoke and a cold shower!! Whoa - that was fun!

 

[chrono]

Enerchi,
Have you been moonlighting as a romance author? It's certainly trashy enough to be believable. The only thing missing is the part about either him or her referencing the other's eyes to some sort of glittering gem to keep this thread gem related.

 

[Enerchi]

I may...or may not have... read a few Harlequin romance novels in my time!!

 

[minousbijoux]

I just laughed so hard my sides hurt. Enerchi, now THAT is talent! I didn't want it to end...tell me more - does Barrett "have his way" with the wench? Does Duchess Diamond's real knight in shining armor come just in time and save her from the clutches of the tall, dark and handsome Barrett, or would that be a bad thing?

 

[Starzin]

"She was helpless in his arms - her heaving bosom barely able to contain the heat and passion she felt for him. Barrett knew his power - he lorded it over her like the wench she was. Power and longing merged together in a whirlwind of sight sound and sensations. They knew they could not hold back - it was inevitable that one day, he would conquer her woman hood and she would be his ---- forever. She knew it too. The blazing flame in his eyes spoke a lifetime of passion lay ahead of them..."

...if only he could find that rock. The searing lust in his eyes was only matched by their glitter, the glitter of that other mistress he sought and which constantly competed with the divine Duchess for his heart and mind--his very soul. Would she wait? Perhaps it was more than they could both bear. Her sapphire eyes glowed with anticipation and she whispered breathlessly...

 

[Enerchi]

"Enerchi- "She was helpless in his arms - her heaving bosom barely able to contain the heat and passion she felt for him. Barrett knew his power - he lorded it over her like the wench she was. Power and longing merged together in a whirlwind of sight sound and sensations. They knew they could not hold back - it was inevitable that one day, he would conquer her woman hood and she would be his ---- forever. She knew it too. The blazing flame in his eyes spoke a lifetime of passion lay ahead of them..."

...if only he could find that rock. The searing lust in his eyes was only matched by their glitter, the glitter of that other mistress he sought and which constantly competed with the divine Duchess for his heart and mind--his very soul. Would she wait? Perhaps it was more than they could both bear. Her sapphire eyes glowed with anticipation and she whispered breathlessly...

... a whisper that told Barrett, "I am yours forever, my love". He lowered his head, she could feel the heat of his breath on her neck, see the candlelight flickering in his eyes, dancing like fire and scintillating like diamonds in the sky. His eyes were black as jade, his intent was crystal clear - he would capture her heart forever in his kiss... He lightly brushed his lips along her milky white flesh - feeling her pulse beneath his lips, eager to press them against her ruby red lips. Slowly he travelled up to her chin, both of them heaving deeply waiting for that moment...

Elle could no longer fight the flame of passion, she turned to Barrett, ready to offer her soul to him - she gazed lustily up at him, the unspoken was so clear. One touch, one kiss, one brush of his rough hand across her silky skin - oh how she craved his touch. All thoughts were of him, nothing else was clear and nothing needed to be. The room was swimming, the heat was rising and the air was thick with need. Her loins were on fire, she could feel his manhood pressing to her thigh...

Suddenly, the Baron de Beers broke into the drawing room, the blade of his sword glittering with sapphires, rubies, spinels... and the largest of all gems, the covetted Emerald that had been taken from Barrett's ancestors, so many years ago in a battle so fierce, so many lives had been lost.

"I never thought I'd find you in such a compromising position, my dear wife. Of all the suitors you could have chosen to cuckold me with, here you are - in the arms of my arch nemisis!!" The Baron practically spit out his words, he was so inflamed to witness what he always predicted his young nubile wife was capable of, yet held his secret hope she did marry him for love.

"Barrett, I would have expected nothing less. Come for your family emerald, have you? You may take my wife, but you will never see this corrundum returned! Mark my words, Lord Barrett, Elle and the Emerald are MINE! MINE! " The veins on his head were pulsing with the hatred of a hundred years, his age and his girth never more prominent than when he was enraged.

And with that, Elle was consummately torn from the arms of her true love, and dragged away, kicking and screaming, pleading to be set free from her gilded cage, knowing her cries would land on deaf ears.

She stole one final glance back at her lover. In that flash, she knew. She knew he'd come for her, their love was too strong that no obstacle - even her husband, the evil Baron de Beers, could keep them from one day being together....

 

[Enerchi]

There ya go, Minous --- threw in a few coloured stone references for you!!! I'm all hot and bothered now...!!!

 

[woofmama]

WOW-I have to visit colored stones more often! This is far more exciting than Rocky Talk
And Enerchi-you devil you

 

[chrono]

Umm, the editor needs to make a small revision before this novel can be published. An emerald is a beryl, not a corundum. Other than that, it's going to be a bestseller!

 

[Enerchi]

WOW-I have to visit colored stones more often! This is far more exciting than Rocky Talk
And Enerchi-you devil you

See how worth while that venture over to CS was??

Umm, the editor needs to make a small revision before this novel can be published. An emerald is a beryl, not a corundum. Other than that, it's going to be a bestseller!

RATS!! I'm too late to edit... damn. Sorry for the error

 

[Upgradable]

And is the sapphire of her eyes Kasmir, Ceylon, Burmese, Madagascan, or Thai?

 

[Jereni]

I just guffawed, out loud at my desk for no reason. Its a good thing I have my own office, or I'd be getting some weird looks right about now.

 

[LD]

EXCUSE ME .............. I could just about stand being described as having a heaving bosom and being called a wench but to have my name changed to "Elle"? No sorry - that's a step too far.

And where are the handcuffs and whips in all this? You guys are MILD!

My gorgeous Barratt has gone into hiding now but he knows he can't conceal his passion for me for too long ..... he'll be back

 

[Enerchi]

I called you "Elle" for the "L" in LD! I didn't want to name you Lynda when you are really Louise... so I went neutral!

Please forgive me, you heaving bosom'd wench , or when Lord Barrett returns, there could very well be some whips and handcuffs involved... don't mess with the author!!!

oh... he'll be back

 

[Upgradable]

May I respectfully request limiting the heaving to a minimum? My first visual is someone hanging over a toilet making gagging noises. Definitely not conducive to the tone being set.