Calling Barrett (aka my husband to be)

[Enerchi]

(while we are on our commercial break and a brief word from our sponsors....)

You guys are killing me here!!! Wicked?? *ME*??? oh no - far from it!! I am sooooo boring and tame in my real life, that I'm having so much fun with this! I have no idea who looks like who, who knows who... I'm just goin' with the creative juices - as they flow, so shall I type!

I'll give Barrett a bit of time to chime in, if he'd like to determine his fate, then ... it will be up to the Snow Queen to lead us on!!!

With as much heaving (oops, sorry Uppy! ), lusting and "loins, decolletage, thrusting and manhood" as we can muster on a PG rated website! I don't want to lose my PS membership over this!

Minous/"Willow" - you are a wonderful editor/supporter!!!

 

[minousbijoux]

I'm just goin' with the creative juices - as they flow

So thats what you call them...always wondered

I can't believe I'm doing this either, because I'm the one who blushes so easily around less than PG-related discussion...

 

[Enerchi]

Do you write by any chance? you had quite a nice passage in there! I was very pleased to become a Snow Queen!! Thanks -

 

[minousbijoux]

I've always considered myself a great copyist - don't necessarily have the ability to do it on my own, but if someone like you leads the way, I can follow along. I added that passage as a late night salvo/offering to those members who couldn't take the suspense...notice I just drew it out further, without giving anything away - thats for you. It was nice getting up this morning and reading the next chapter.

We have to get her luxurious bedding in there. For symmetry, Kenny needs a bit more action, and we gotta have more jewel/gemstone references - I love what you did about her opalescent dream!

Also, we have to get feedback from "our loyal followers" to make sure we're not losing our audience due to lack of, um, lack of uh action?

 

[derbygal]

I've read a bazillion romance novels back in the day and Enerchi you are goooooood! Seriously. You should think about writing one.

 

[Enerchi]

I've read a bazillion romance novels back in the day and Enerchi you are goooooood! Seriously. You should think about writing one.

thank you so much, derbygal - that is sweet of you to say!

 

[minousbijoux]

Aww, Enerchi, I wish I could communicate off the boards before writing the next chapter - I have so many details for you!

 

[derbygal]

Not meaning to threadjack, but this thread got me thinking of one of my favorite movies, Romancing the Stone. Any other fans out there? Every time I watch it, I want to run out and buy a humongous emerald. It was also a romance novel type book that came out at the time of the movie. Read it back in high school. Good times!

 

[derbygal]

Here's what the book looked like

 

[LD]

I LOVED that film! A great romance with comedy - couldn't be better!

 

[Enerchi]

Aww, Enerchi, I wish I could communicate off the boards before writing the next chapter - I have so many details for you!

Minous!
Do you have anything listed anywhere? DB/LT? I could connect with you there....

 

[yssie]

I LOVE this thread! RT has nothin' on CS apparently - and Enerchi, I had no idea you had such hidden talent and we have 6k of posts together on the Other Side! I feel a bit betrayed

 

[Enerchi]

Yssie!!! That's funny! Please don't feel betrayed - I'm a woman of many hungers and wants... it takes the full range of PS to fulfill all my needs!! CS/RT/SMTB/Hangout/Antique and Vintage ... I can't be satiated by just one forum!!

 

[Starzin]

Oh good...I'm glad it's "Intermission". Having just woken up, I need to catch up!

In these stories, Elle had made Enerchi come to life - a wise, fun loving, and generous snow queen from the North - and granted her the most powerful magic.

It was only when reading this that I learned to pronounce your name! The Life Force Power of the Universe! It somehow was always Enerkey in my head - and I'm into this stuff how could I have missed it? Duh. Nice touch including everyone though

Jeez Enerchi, my eyes are like cornflower blue sapphires NOT emeralds! I dunno, you've had me a ginger/green eyed woman with a heaving bust - I sound like a bad Bette Midler!

ROFL!! I was going to answer Uppy's earlier question with "the most prized and coveted Kashmir colour of course" until I read you'd had this umm...makeover. Quick stopover at the beauty shop mebbe.

You guys are killing me here!!! Wicked?? *ME*??? oh no - far from it!! I am sooooo boring and tame in my real life, that I'm having so much fun with this! I have no idea who looks like who, who knows who... I'm just goin' with the creative juices - as they flow, so shall I type!

When I put that paragraph in following your first post, I thought maybe it would turn into one of those threads where different people keep adding the next para or two. Little did I know we had unleashed The Bookie Monster! You're unbelievable...well done to you and your editor

Not meaning to threadjack, but this thread got me thinking of one of my favorite movies, Romancing the Stone. Any other fans out there? Every time I watch it, I want to run out and buy a humongous emerald.

Me! Me! Me! Loved that film

I LOVE this thread! RT has nothin' on CS apparently

Teach you to visit more often

 

[Enerchi]

The good snow queen from the north has not heard from Barrett or minous... so shall proceed with the tale at her own discretion!

Perhaps a glass or two of red wine has been consumed... perhaps there will be some answers coming up ... perhaps there may or may not be some passionate consummation...

And, as a side note, the snow queen will be travelling from her northern abode to the bright diamond lights of NYC *very early* sunday morning (up at 530, out by 6am, airport by 630, flight by 720 am!), so there could be a delay in the action ( so to speak!) for a little bit - be patient, faithful readers, the Snow Queen is not gone for good, she's just on vacation!

 

[Enerchi]

The footsteps felt like giant drum beats pounding in her ears but they could not have been more silent in reality. Loving's heart was racing in her chest, bound to break free at any moment, the fear and anxiety rising to meteoric levels knowing she was mere moments away from the answers she was seeking. The shadows were getting longer thru the windows, the gaslights had not fully illuminated the room yet, it was as though she was held within a shroud of fading light - the warmth of a sunstone yet the sensation of cold metal. The final foot fall...

That face! Those eyes, that regal equine nose, those lips... it was BARRETT! It was him! He was here, in her room, as he'd been for the last day, waiting and watching over her, murmuring to Willow his concerns for the health and survival of Loving. Now, seeing him before her, she could not believe it was true. He bent down to touch his forehead to hers. He looked deep into her emerald eyes - they were glistening with joy, pure Colombian green with incomparable clarity, facets that mirrored her tears and flooded down her cheek as she realized the Baron was dead. His warm kashmir sapphire blue eyes danced with joy when they met hers. She saw the depths of his love in that brilliant blue reflection. As thought his soul was exposed like pools of crystal clear water.

"Loving, I have waited so long for you to awaken. I have so much to share with you but now that we can speak, all of it seems so meaningless. It will only be you and I from now on. The Baron will never be a threat to us again. You are safe, my love, safe from the horrid life he held you captive in. I am yours - forever - if you will have me".

And with that last word, he dropped to his knees beside her bed, grasped her jewel encrusted fingers and slowly removed each ring from her slender hands. Gone, just like shackles falling from her wrists, where the bribery gifts the Baron had given her - hoping to buy her love but knowing it would never work. The spessarite that glowed as strong and bright as a ball of fire resembling the setting sun, fell down. The mali garnet, fresh green and its sister ring, the mint merelani garnet, tumbled to the ground. Barrett kissed and caressed each bare knuckle as it was exposed. The tsavorite in its rich yellow gold bezel setting, encrusted with rhodolite was next. Tourmalines, red and green, were next. Finally her jewelled cuff bracelet, with its milgrain and filigree detail, set with spinels as beautiful as the crown jewels, was unlatched and placed upon her taught abdomen. The choice was given to Loving - the first time she'd been free to make her own choice in as long as she could remember. "Choose me, Loving, and I will give you all of my heart for the rest of eternity. I will never force myself upon you - you must give yourself freely to me. I am at your mercy, my love".

Her senses were awakened as they had never been before. Every fibre in her being wanted this man more than air and life itself. The pulsing in her head and heart was a life force, as strong as her want and need for him. Each breath she delayed was a moment less they could spend together. Her answer was immediate but delivered slowly. She wanted to savour every moment that lay before them.

She gazed deep into his blue eyes, they had grown stormy with lust and desire, as had hers. Her lids were heavy, her touch was like angel wings upon him. Raising herself from the feather pillows to look directly at Barrett, she began her seduction. How she had dreamed of this moment.

Slowly, she removed the cape from his shoulders and let it fall to the oak floor below. She shifted her body to face him directly, briefly touching his bristled cheeks and stroking his lip with her thumb, as she began to unleash his strong chest from his collared and cuffed crisp white linen shirt. Barrett groaned, a gutteral growl that told Loving all she needed to know. He was hers and she was his. Finally.

His bare chest fully exposed, she splayed her fingers over his chest, hot breathe on his neck, light angel kisses covering all she could touch and see. Barrett could not hold back any longer. Roughly, he grabbed her delicate wrists and stopped her from this exquisite torture. Loving did not understand - his face was a mask of mixed emotion. "No, not like this", he whispered against her ear... "I need you, all of you, I can not soar if you are not beneath me, like a gentle bird enveloped within my wings". Both lovers yearned to continue, knowing they were alone in the manse, knowing they would never be interrupted again.

Loving stood before Barrett and offered herself to him fully. He stood to join her, letting his hands fall to her tiny waist and pull her closer to him, pressing his throbbing manhood into her - his desire evident and untamed. With rapid abandon, the silk and lace undergarments, previously hidden by her linen bed clothes, were all that stood between Loving and Barrett. His trousers fell to the floor and like a sword unleashed from its sheath, his raw masculinity was awakened and glistened in anticipation. Loving's pretty lacy things soon joined the trousers and as the fabrics entwined, so did their bodies. Barrett held her in his arms, caressing her bosom, feeling the fullness in her breasts and lightly flicking his thumb on her dark and sensitive nipples. Tenderly, gently at first, then with an intensity previously unknown, he eased her backwards to the welcoming bed beneath them. Frantic and frenzied, he touched her slick wetness and watching her writhe below him. At that moment, Loving felt more alive than she had ever felt. It was torture to wait for him to enter her. Eagerly, Loving grasped his shaft and pulled him towards her welcoming womanhood. Seeking more, he thrust forward, gently at first then deeply, almost savagely. Writhing in passion, an ecstasy never imagined, they rode the waves of these sensations as never before. Her body warm and welcoming, his taught and firm, they matched a perfect rhythm - a concerto like none other. One thrust after another, sending both into fits of pulsing sensations like a volcanic eruption. Over and over, waves of electricity shot threw them. Words were not needed as he looked into her eyes at that final crest of pleasure, "I am yours and you are mine", flashed like a lightening bolt between them. Calling out as they both climaxed, there could be no turning back.

Laying together, limbs entwined, breathing, rapidily at first then slowly returning to normal, they enjoyed the warmth of their skin against each other. Soft kisses now replaced the heat of passion, but now, those kisses meant so much more. They had their future to plan - a new life to forge as Lord and Lady Barrett. Loving had a final thought before she drifted to sleep, a smile upon her face thinking, "Thank you Enerchi for making my dreams come true! I always hoped that one day Barrett and I would be together and you made that happen..." and with that final thought, Loving fell asleep in the arms of the man she loved, satiated and spent, the happiest she had ever been.

 

[Starzin]

*gulp*

Whew!

 

[Starzin]

Well done Enerchi (& Minou) - sterling stuff...or is that golden? You've definitely got the bones of your first novel there...just need to "flesh" it out by about 150 pages for publication

And, as a side note, the snow queen will be travelling from her northern abode to the bright diamond lights of NYC *very early* sunday morning (up at 530, out by 6am, airport by 630, flight by 720 am!), so there could be a delay in the action ( so to speak!) for a little bit - be patient, faithful readers, the Snow Queen is not gone for good, she's just on vacation!

Have a wonderful trip and thank you sooooo much for your time, energy and fantastic imagination and story-telling ability! (mwah!)

 

[Enerchi]

My pleasure, Starzin!

 

[chrono]

And the story is completed in time for Enechi to embark on her book signing tour. Have a enjoyable trip without unexpected delays.

 

[derbygal]

Very nice!!

 

[minousbijoux]

Wow, had no idea what I was getting into - amazing story, Enerchi!

Can't wait until our protagonists visit CS tomorrow

As for you, dear snow queen, I hope you spend your time in New York looking for an agent and a publisher!

 

[Enerchi]

No guarantees Harper & Rowe will commit to my demands!! Going to hold out to be paid in jewelry tho!! Think I could work on the next 50 Shades of Grey team?

Hope LD and Barrett are, um , er...." Satisfied" with the turn of events!

Off to the airport now. Dust please for a smooth flight....

 

[chrono]

Safe travels. The weather isn't looking good here in the NE. Schools are closed, as are government offices. I know that flights leaving the area must be rescheduled so I am concerned arriving flights will be affected as well.

 

[minousbijoux]

Yes, Snow Queen, you kind of flew into the eye of the storm, as it were...

 

[gsellis]

Poor Elle, if it was not for the Baron's untimely arrival, her heart would have been dashed. In the heat of their passion, as Barrett turned to remove his constraining jeans, Elle noticed the soiled seat of his britches, caked in Georgia clay. Barrett had been frolicing deep in a pit seeking his true passion, a vein of riches in the virgin pegmatite. She would have realized that she would have forever been only a fleeting diversion from his true love, the purple queen. Instead, she was spared. An unanswered prayer. Allowing her to live out her days with the fond wishes of a moment that never came to be.



PS - I did not see that this had made it to 3 pages with multiple posts... this is the alternate to only the first post.

 

[chrono]

Bravo! I like this version too. Lots of tension and gem related action. This story is like the "choose your ending" type where depending on which path is taken at specific crossroads, the characters end up doing very different things.

 

[minousbijoux]

All I can say is thank God it was Georgia clay on the seat of his britches.

George, I think you've got talent too. Keep it in mind when you're ready to retire; a nice alternate career in the romance novella field

 

[Starzin]

All I can say is thank God it was Georgia clay on the seat of his britches.

George, I think you've got talent too. Keep it in mind when you're ready to retire; a nice alternate career in the romance novella field

 

[Rosebloom]

I'm as red as a ruby!!! Enerchi - you seriously have a second career waiting for you! And we'll all be here to help you spend your royalties! (6ctw fy radiant e-band anyone?)