Cehrabehra
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Be amused, it will make writing easier!Cehrabehra|1289661366|2764366 said:I am sitting here watching " a knights tale" and lo and behold, it is SO much like the book I'm writing lol Okay, so it's not about jousting and I think some of my characters are more colorful, but there are elements that are very similar haha... what's funny is that the basic story I've had for years in my head is nothing really like this but as I've been writing the details must have been subconsciously filtering from my memory of this haha... of course nothing is the same, except perhaps some of the *feel* but still... dunno if I'm discouraged or amused
Do you want some help moving past it? Post the sentence, we'll help you work on it!dragonfly411|1289620687|2764027 said:I'm stuck on one sentence, and it's at the turning point of the first third of my book.
dragonfly411|1289620687|2764027 said:I'm stuck on one sentence, and it's at the turning point of the first third of my book.
Liane|1289686954|2764808 said:dragonfly411|1289620687|2764027 said:I'm stuck on one sentence, and it's at the turning point of the first third of my book.
This one gets me too a lot. First and last sentences in chapters often derail me. I want it to pack a certain punch, you know? Or at least not be totally lame. But sometimes finding the right words in the right order takes FOREVER. So I just put in some lame placeholder and move on.
I can't remember if I said this already so forgive me if I'm being redundant, but a couple of years back when I was first starting out, I read an author (think it was Elizabeth Bear, might be mistaken on this) blog about how her process had changed over her books, and she said that at this point she just writes cheat notes like [fight scene here] or [Character X details his nefarious plans here] when she's not interested in detailing a particular thing, then skips over it to get to the next scene she feels like writing at that moment in time.
When I read this it was totally amazing, like WOAH YOU CAN DO THAT?!
I still don't do it myself -- I think you need a certain amount of confidence that you can fill in the gaps later, and I'm not there yet -- but it might be worth trying if you're stalled out here. NaNo is, IMO, best used as a zero draft, so since you're going to have to go back and fix a lot of stuff anyway, why not just add this to the list?