Need an honest opinion - would this be too whack??

[teapot]

I think it''s cute, go for it.

 

[kama_s]

Date: 5/12/2009 8:10:24 AM
Author: doodle
Personally, I thought it was really cute until it got to the bit about being fondled by a drunkard, then I was reminded of the creepy old man who always tries to grope all the girls at the bar where my best friend works, and that kinda killed it for me, haha! As long as you''re relatively sure it won''t OFFEND someone, go for it!

Mr. Kama doesn''t like that bit either! Maybe I''ll just omit it?! I''ve had a whole bunch of drunk guys hitting on me, but it''s always been so incredibly hilarious. Thank goodness, no fondling though *blech*

 

[kama_s]

Date: 5/12/2009 4:18:13 AM
Author: honey22
That''s the reading we are having at our wedding!! It''s perfectly us and we both love it. We didn''t want anything too over the top and when we read that, we both knew it was for us. We are also having a more serious reading, special but not too over the top.

If it feels right for the both of you, then go for it! It''s your special day and you want to make sure it reflects your personalities!

No way! That''s awesome! If I end up doing it, I''ll let you know how it goes. If it backfires, you''ll know before it''s time for your ceremony!!

 

[kama_s]

Thank you, once again, for all your opinions. You girls are fabulous.

Ally and jcarly: I see what you''re saying and it makes perfect sense. I will be saying something sweet before (and if) I say the poem. But the suggestion of reading it out during speeches is fantastic! That idea didn''t even cross my mind. This is why I love my PSers! We weren''t doing ANY speeches, except for a small thank-you message from us...and I think that would be a better time for me to share the poem. Would liven up the reception!