wishes & advice sign wording help

[jcrow]

Instead of a guest book, we are having cards and several pens for people to leave a message of advice, words and wisdom to FI and i. to explain, we are having an instructions sign. we could use your help with the wording. i''m know there''s lots of great writers on this board - and i''m not one of them

we want to keep it short and sweet. we also want to be sure they remember to sign their card. here''s what we''ve got so far:

please write your thoughts and wishes
to share with us for life,
for the greatest gift of all
will be the gift of your advice.

when all is said and done
and there is nothing left to say
please remeber to sign your name
and continue to enjoy this day.

 

[firebirdgold]

I think what you have already is perfect! The rhyme will help it stick in peoples head.

 

[belle]

that is perfect jcrow!
what a great idea.

 

[aprilcait]

It''s great as is!

 

[jcrow]

thanks everyone. i just don''t think the second part flows well...

 

[labbielove]

So cute! but i see what you mean about the flow of part 2-
how about keeping the same idea, but something like:

"When all is said and done,
and you''ve nothing left to say
please do sign your name
and go on, enjoy the day"

 

[FireGoddess]

I love it, Jcrow!