invitation proof!

[cocolaw]

ok i like them, but i am going to have her make our names larger and the rest of the wording smaller. i feel like our names do not pop enough!

 

[cocolaw]

here is the reply card!! any changes that you think need to be made?

 

[Luckyeshe]

It''s beautiful!

I love it! I''m glad you''re getting the size of your names changed since I think it should be bigger than the rest of the invitation. Also, I love the color of the card, but maybe your names should be a different color like silver. It just blends in very well...this is just my opinion to make your names on your inviites pop out more. I hope you don''t mind.

 

[D&T]

I like the fonts, but you are right your names sort of blends in though. Its beautiful nonetheless

ETA: and I like the idea of your names being in a different color perhaps?

 

[cleokizzy]

i like the font. is the font the main "design" of your invitation?

 

[cocolaw]

no, i welcome any suggestions !!! i already told her to make our names bigger and the rest smaller and she is getting that proof to me tomorrow because she says she has to "rip apart our calligraphy!" whatever that means haha! silver does sound pretty though! i will post round 2 and if it still needs some umph, then maybe ill try silver for round 3!

 

[D&T]

Date: 8/25/2009 4:39:50 PM
Author: cocolaw
ok the invitations will be with these maps. we will also be using white envelopes with navy liners to match the wording!

What a cute map idea! I love it~

 

[cocolaw]

thank you pricescope moderators!! sorry, i had the original map removed because i accidentally left our names on it! woops!!

ok so we are using these maps, and we will have white envelopes with navy liners.

 

[Amanda.Rx]

SOOO pretty! How I love letterpress! Cute maps, too!

 

[cocolaw]

thank you amanda!!

 

[cocolaw]

i am also going to have her add "dinner to follow"

do you see any other changes that need to be made?

 

[charbie]

they look fantastically fabulous!!!!!!!!!! i love that look. i have to agree that the names need to pop more, but they totally set the tone for your wedding. yayay!

 

[JerseyGrl81]

Very nice! Another way to get your names to "pop" is to have them written in a different font then the rest of your invitation.

 

[Rock_of_Love]

Those are GORGEOUS!!! Love ''em! Love the map, too!!

Refresh my memory (sorry I can''t remember) are you getting married in a church? If so, you are good! If not, I believe it should be "pleasure of your company" vs. "honour of your presence." Just double checkin''!

 

[katamari]

They will look great once the font size is changed (and look pretty darn nice now). Are you not having people RSVP if they are a "no"? That is the only thing I saw that stood out to me--no option to decline. Not that anyone will, of course, but. . .

 

[Dannielle]

Yeah, the names do need to be bigger- I think they will look fantastic!

The map is so cute, its all coming together really well

 

[cocolaw]

Date: 8/26/2009 12:10:50 AM
Author: Rock_of_Love
Those are GORGEOUS!!! Love ''em! Love the map, too!!


Refresh my memory (sorry I can''t remember) are you getting married in a church? If so, you are good! If not, I believe it should be ''pleasure of your company'' vs. ''honour of your presence.'' Just double checkin''!

i had NO idea!!!! thanks for telling me. i am asking our artist to check with the etiquette person at bella figura right now. good point! we are getting married outside!

 

[cocolaw]

Date: 8/26/2009 1:21:22 AM
Author: katamari
They will look great once the font size is changed (and look pretty darn nice now). Are you not having people RSVP if they are a ''no''? That is the only thing I saw that stood out to me--no option to decline. Not that anyone will, of course, but. . .

we were going to have a line for how many people are attending, but then i decided not to at the very last minute. i am afraid that some people on the fiance''s side might interpret that as an open invitation to add more guests. do you think people will figure out that i want them to just put a zero by the food, or leave the food blank if they are not coming? again, good point!!

 

[princessplease]

Lovely!!!!!!!!!!!!!! They''re so nice!