on FI''s computer. Still need help.

[happy in love]

Hi everyone,
my computer is verrrrry ill!!!!! I am going to do this from FI''s laptop instead.

Should I fix the banner that the ring bearers are going carry? I feel like the "comes the" is too far to the right.
the first pic is how it looks now:

(it will have some decorative designs on it too)

 

[happy in love]

this is how it will look if I fix it...

am I being too picky or would you guys fix it too???

 

[musey]

The spacing looks absolutely identical to me. The only difference that is visually discernible is the ellipses. Sorry if I'm missing something...

ETA: It was bugging me so I put overlayed the two in photoshop... the spacing is exactly the same, the words line up perfectly. So is it just that you want to know whether or not to use the ellipses?

 

[Harleigh]

Hi Happy,

I''m not sure what it is, but I do happen to like the second banner better. I keep trying to compare them to discern why exactly I choose the second one, but I don''t know the reason.

So sorry I''m not more help!

 

[happy in love]

I would like to scrap the whole thing and start over, but, I thought maybe if I cut off some of the fabric from the left side and then added the ... that it would look more balanced visually.
Right now it seems to me that the "here" starts a few inches before the "comes" and the "bride" ends just after "the"

Maybe FI is right, maybe I am a little nuts!!!

 

[musey]

Date: 10/8/2007 11:06:52 PM
Author: Harleigh

I''m not sure what it is, but I do happen to like the second banner better. I keep trying to compare them to discern why exactly I choose the second one, but I don''t know the reason.

Harleigh, I''m with you on the second one, I''m pretty sure it''s because of the ellipses. It evens out the spacing.

Happy, I''d just go with option 2, if it were me. It''s not worth more headache

It looks great that way.

 

[happy in love]

Harleigh and Musey,
thank you. I think I will add the dots and take it in a little before the "h" so it will look like the second picture.
I am so bummed that I didn''t catch my mistake before I painted it.
Thanks for your input!

 

[Harleigh]

HOLY CRAP!!! YOU actually painted that yourself??? I thought it was silk-screened on there! I am SOOOO impressed, happy! Very nice job! Love it! You are so very talented!

 

[happy in love]

Harleigh you make me laugh!
I printed out the words and then traced them onto the banner before painting it. I couldn''t have done it freehand!!
I''m glad you like it though... I can''t wait to finish it, I''ll post pics when I do.

 

[Harleigh]

Sounds good, happy! Looking forward to seeing it completed!