RSVP Wording question

[Mandarine]

Hi girls...I know I''ve been MIA. I keep checking the forums but barely have time to resopnd!!. It''s been crazy at work lately!.
I am very close to finalizing my invites...should have them printed and assembled by the end of this week!...I fell behind because I got sick...so I have to kick into high gear!

So I have a quick question...is this wording ok?

The favour of a reply is requested by the twenty second of January
M_____________________________________
M _____________________________________
Accept with Pleasure []
Decline with regret []


Thank you!!
M~

 

[zoebartlett]

Looks good to me! I''m not sure what you''re doing for the food...paella, maybe, right? Anyway, will you have a place for guests to check off what they''d like to have? Other than that, I can''t think of anything that may be missing.

 

[Mandarine]

Thank you Zoe!
It will be Paella and beef tenderloin, but they''re set-up kind of like stations

Thank you for your help

M~

 

[zoebartlett]

That sounds yummy! Mmmm-mmmm, good.

 

[Mandarine]

lol, I can''t wait for the food...I am so excited with our menu!! :9

 

[BELLA9280]

i would suggest a line where people can write the number of people attending like 1 or 2, or sometimes people write 4 because they think their kids are invited and they really aren''t, or people bring a date when they weren''t invited with one!! does that make sense to you??Good luck

 

[AceP]

Date: 12/3/2007 5:19:56 PM
Author:Mandarine


Hi girls...I know I've been MIA. I keep checking the forums but barely have time to resopnd!!. It's been crazy at work lately!.
I am very close to finalizing my invites...should have them printed and assembled by the end of this week!...I fell behind because I got sick...so I have to kick into high gear!

So I have a quick question...is this wording ok?

The favour of a reply is requested by the twenty second of January


M_____________________________________
M _____________________________________


Accept with Pleasure []
Decline with regret []


Thank you!!
M~

small copy-edits but...

twenty-second should have a hyphen in it.
and... keep your capital letters consistent, so:

Accept with Pleasure
Decline with Regret
-or-
Accept with pleasure
Decline with regret

I'd go with the latter, personally.

 

[Mandarine]

Thank you everyone!!
I didn''t add a line for the number of people since it''s a small wedding and I''m just letting people write two names down...hehe...
Ace - wow, thank you for noticing those two things!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am happy to report I just dropped off the files at sir speedy. I spent 3 hours there because one of my fonts refused to load on their computer so I had to change some of the design. I liked the original one better, but oh well...

Thank you all for the help!!!

M~